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Website: Fail! and a Teaser (for Tuesday)

Wonder Woman
Okay, so again... apologies to anyone who changed my link on their website/blog to the new WordPress address, and has now had to change it back. I admit that I messed up (stupidly) when trying to download my WP files and upload them to my sparkly new domain name. But then I got really pissed off slightly frustrated and deleted the WP blog before I was certain things were saved properly. *ahem* I had a weird day yesterday. It started out pretty good (and I wrote lots), but there were Other Things that knocked my equilibrium and I took it out on my in-progress-website. Technology is such an easy target. ;)

Actually, it turns out that it's not all my fault, as my domain name (www.karenmahoney.net) has just... *poof!* disappeared (completely randomly) from the control panel of my web hosting company. They are looking into it right now. So, I'll be starting from scratch with a website when I have the time/patience/inclination. This time I think I'll stick with HTML. I've gone off WordPress. Or maybe I'll just pay a professional one day, when I am published.

And now, as it's Tuesday - and St. Patrick's Day (have a good one!) - I will celebrate by giving you a teaser. Just a tiny snippet from yesterday's writing. Nothing fancy...


[from Soul Trader]

It was a much more sudden exit from the Lower World than I would ever have chosen, and the re-entry into my body felt like a fist slamming into my gut, knocking all the air out of me. I was left choking and gagging on the floor of the interview room.

I dropped the sweatshirt and pulled myself onto my knees, sucking in huge gulps of air that seemed to stop short of my chest, still trying to shake that dark presence out of my body and mind. I actually felt slimy, as though something particularly greasy had rubbed itself all over my flesh and left its stinking mark on me. I needed a scalding hot bath and a ton of sea salt, and even then I wasn’t sure I would feel clean.

I slowly became aware of Harper leaning over me, fear and uncertainty in his eyes. He reached out as though to pull me to my feet, and I held out a trembling hand to stop him.

“Don’t touch me.” I put both hands to my face and knelt there, trying desperately to catch my breath. My mind was racing in time to the pounding of my heart. My head was beginning to throb and I knew I would have a stellar migraine if I didn’t get some painkillers down me, fast.
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[info]psamphire wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2009 10:41 am (UTC)
I've just started to look into Wordpress to build Steph's new website, and while the blog bit looks okay, building ordinary pages seems a pain. I guess I probably stick with it, but I'm already starting to think about using a real CMS. *If* I succeed and *if* it works out, I'd be happy to give advice when you decide to try again. :)
[info]kaz_mahoney wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2009 11:08 am (UTC)
Thank you! Okay, we'll see where I'm at when you're okay with Wordpress. I think I'll steer clear for now... But cheers. :)
[info]brian_ohio wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2009 11:18 am (UTC)
Interesting snippet. Liking the 1st POV. Nice detail, I can feel her pain and disgust. Excellent as always. Plus a migraine... that's called 'writing what you know'. ;-)

Why do I have the feeling this Harper guy is going to be modeled after me again.
[info]kaz_mahoney wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2009 10:24 pm (UTC)
1st POV is a challenge for me, but I'm liking more and more. Thanks! :)

Yeah. Nick Harper = Brian Kell. How did you guess?!
[info]jp_davis wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2009 11:35 am (UTC)
Fascinating snippet! Looking forward to more. Sucks about your blog! Of course, it works for me, since I like you anchored here on LJ...
[info]kaz_mahoney wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2009 10:25 pm (UTC)
Hee! That seems to be the general consensus (re. bloggin)... ;) *feels loved*

And thanks re. the snippet!
[info]faerie_writer wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2009 12:12 pm (UTC)
Nice snippet! Loved the slimy/greasy/stinking image. :D
[info]kaz_mahoney wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2009 10:25 pm (UTC)
Thanks, Maggie! ;)
[info]fandoria wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2009 01:10 pm (UTC)
Love the teaser!!! Great descriptions and tension and everything.

And I have a theory as to why your WP blog blew up on you... Maybe it's because you're supposed to just stay here on LJ. ;)
[info]kaz_mahoney wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2009 10:26 pm (UTC)
Thank you!! :)

Hmm... yeah, me and LJ are longterm friends, I think. *g*
[info]akabins wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2009 01:20 pm (UTC)
Great teaser! Very vivid! :)
[info]kaz_mahoney wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2009 10:26 pm (UTC)
Hey, thanks! :)
[info]music_lover3 wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2009 01:54 pm (UTC)
I love the snippet! The imagery is great!
[info]kaz_mahoney wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2009 10:27 pm (UTC)
*blushes* Thanks! :)
[info]meredith_wood wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2009 02:47 pm (UTC)
Great snip! I never seem to have a problem falling right into whatever world you've decided to share with us.
[info]kaz_mahoney wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2009 10:27 pm (UTC)
That's a lovely thing to say. Cheers! :)
[info]jenwriterr wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2009 03:32 pm (UTC)
I'm hooked. I'm hooked! I want to read more!

So, if you need an extra beta reader when you're done with this one... :)
[info]kaz_mahoney wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2009 10:27 pm (UTC)
LOL! Thanks, Jen. I'll remember that... ;)
[info]dan_phi wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2009 03:35 pm (UTC)
Happy St Patrick's Day! And very nice snippet. Definitely count me among those teased :)
[info]kaz_mahoney wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2009 10:28 pm (UTC)
I am to tease... ;)

Thanks! Hope you had a good day.
(Anonymous) wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2009 06:32 pm (UTC)
Loved the snippit. More. ;)

~L
[info]kaz_mahoney wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2009 10:28 pm (UTC)
Cheers! Is that Lina? Hope you're okay. :)
(Anonymous) wrote:
Mar. 18th, 2009 07:43 am (UTC)
Yep, it's me! Hi! :)

I know I know *head to desk* I still don't have an LJ, but for some crazy reason every time I get on the computer I get so distrated. So many blogs to read, so little time. lol.

Just finished The Sweet Scent of Blood a few days ago. It was awesome. Loved it! And it was so cool that I won my very own copy in the same month of my birthday! I'm so lucky! Thanks again, Kaz. ;)

~Lina
[info]kaz_mahoney wrote:
Mar. 18th, 2009 11:56 am (UTC)
You just need to register for a free account. It's easy! ;)

I'm so glad you loved Suzanne's book - thanks for letting me know! Oh, and happy belated birthday.
[info]shaelise wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2009 06:59 pm (UTC)
Love the snippet. I can feel the sliminess and the repulsiveness of the dark presence. Sorry about the blog, that's a pain. Good luck with it. Glad we'll see you around here still though (just think, less transfering between sites). :)
[info]kaz_mahoney wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2009 10:29 pm (UTC)
Cool, thanks for the great feedback. :)

I can't imagine life without at least x-posting to LJ. But maybe I'll just stay here ALL the time. It's been good enough for the last 2 years, right?
[info]stormywriting wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2009 11:25 pm (UTC)
You're not allowed to post any more snippets. This has been bouncing around in my mind all day :P
[info]kaz_mahoney wrote:
Mar. 18th, 2009 11:57 am (UTC)
Hee! Sorry about that... ;)

Thanks very much, though!
[info]danfaust wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2009 11:35 pm (UTC)
Consider me officially teased.

Wait...err...that didn't come out right. :)

I have to tell you, I had a minor breakdown when I tried to go to your Wordpress blog and the Internet yelled at me. I'm glad to see that your LJ site is still here and you didn't just get wiped out of existence (that would have made me sad).
[info]kaz_mahoney wrote:
Mar. 18th, 2009 11:57 am (UTC)
I am still alive and well. :)

And thanks re. the teaser!
[info]reneesweet wrote:
Mar. 18th, 2009 01:31 am (UTC)
Love the teaser - great descriptions. I especially loved, "sucking in huge gulps of air that seemed to stop short of my chest". Aaaaaaaaand I love the name Harper.

Bottom line? Love.
[info]kaz_mahoney wrote:
Mar. 18th, 2009 11:58 am (UTC)
Thanks so much!! Win! :)

And I love that icon. *sigh*
[info]chant_1 wrote:
Mar. 18th, 2009 03:14 am (UTC)
Sounds like the trip to Lower World is not a fun one! I really got the unpleasantness of the whole thing...very intriguing!

I'm sorry your web site went BOOM but so glad you're sticking around here! : )
[info]kaz_mahoney wrote:
Mar. 18th, 2009 11:58 am (UTC)
Thank you!! :)

Yeah, I'd miss you guys... You're stuck with me. ;)
[info]daydreammuse wrote:
Mar. 18th, 2009 05:37 pm (UTC)
Oh, I liked the 1st POV. It feels natural, but I have to add a small remark. I spotted "as though" being used twice in too short a distance of each other and since it sounds a bit unsual to be said by a person in 1st POV, I would have to suggest maybe changing one of them. But that is just me.

PS: Sorry about the blog and site.
[info]kaz_mahoney wrote:
Mar. 18th, 2009 07:54 pm (UTC)
Actually, that's really good feedback - thanks! :)
[info]daydreammuse wrote:
Mar. 18th, 2009 08:41 pm (UTC)
No biggie. Just mention that in the acknowledgements, whne you get published. hahhahah!! Oh I crack myself up. Anyways I am always on durty for the prosperity of fellow pen-lovers.
(Anonymous) wrote:
Jan. 4th, 2010 08:18 pm (UTC)
Hi this is just one opinion i have on the book "The Eternal Kiss". I think that it would be really cool if you took your short story "Falling to Ash" and made it into a novel, I could really see myself getting lost in its pages. I also think it would be a very good read to recommend to everyone. The world that you portrayed is unlike any other, it would be really amazing to see what the outcome would be.
Katrina
[info]kaz_mahoney wrote:
Jan. 5th, 2010 03:53 pm (UTC)
Hi Katrina,

Thanks very much. :) I am really, really hoping that my agent will sell a Moth novel this year. I've written it, we now need to make it as good as possible and then find a publisher who would like to publish it...

Cheers,
Karen
(Anonymous) wrote:
May. 31st, 2010 11:28 pm (UTC)
:)
I read your story in The Eternal Kiss, and at the back of the book there's this little paragraph that talks about you. It says you are a tarot reader? Well, I'm trying to be one. Any help?

Totally unrelated, i know =.=
Love it, though =]
~~~~fave2727@hotmail.com
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